juli 27, 2010

E-writing assignment 3

1. Nonnet

Felix
Once upon a time I had a cat
That cat was really very fat
He could not speak, he was mute
But his small paws were cute
He only ate mice
And sometimes rice
Then he died
And I –
Cried

2. Own choice

The body of dance
Boundless exploration, a world of infinity
The pulse, steady
The rhythm, inventive
But the movement, fleeting
Boundless exploration, impossible to capture
The possibility, striking
The moment, breathtaking
But the before, oblivious
Boundless exploration, the flesh only there for a split second
But the experience, divine

3. Limerick

Hat-less Anne
The hat-less little girl was called Anne
Her new cap was blown off by a fan
Now she was sour faced
Cap flew off, hasty paced
A slim chance catching it but she ran


That's all folks!
Malin

6 kommentarer:

  1. I really liked your poems. You sure seem to be able to write a lot as it seems to come natural for you. The first two I really enjoyed reading and so even the third. But I do think the third one lacked a good punch line if I should be honest.

    But I would enjoy reading your next assignment.

    SvaraRadera
  2. Thanks for the feedback! I will make sure to think about the puch lines in the future! :)

    SvaraRadera
  3. Hi Malin!

    1) The nonnet was both sooo cute and tragic! and I like that..

    2) I really loved this one! Is a lovely description that you´ve made and it makes my eyes water.

    3) It was funny and I can see Anne running for it, but as Robert said - it might need an even better ending to create a good punch line.

    Keep it up!

    SvaraRadera
  4. Thank you Lovisa, I appreciate the feedback. Useful as always to here both good and bad about your writing. :)

    SvaraRadera
  5. Hello :)

    1. I really liked your nonnet! I have a cat like that so I could really realte to it

    2. the poem of your choice was great! I was really touched!

    3. I agree with "lovisen", you can really picture it in your head!

    Great job!

    SvaraRadera
  6. Thanks Martina! See you in class. :)

    SvaraRadera